Is it okey to use children for advertisement?

 We see a lot of children in advertisement, either it’s in tv or when schooling threw internet. I think using children is not okey. Small children can not understand most of things so if u even asked a small kid if they want to take part in a advertisement they would probably say yes, because they cannot understand what comes with it. I believe children that have less then 13 years should not be allowed in advertisement, even if they have their parents consent, because parents could be using their children for money. 

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  1. englishdiary7 listopada 2021 09:47

    Too short again.
    The intro is unnecessary.
    The last sentence introduces a new idea whereas it should provide a conclusion!
    Avoid very colloquial forms like 'u' for YOU - they are inappropriate in writing.

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